SCENE #1: ESTABLISHING SHOT - OUTSIDE LOLA'S MANSION - DANICA, LOLA, FANCY CAR.
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Danica: Meet Lola.
Lola: Mmmm. Hmmm.
SCENE #2: CLOSEUP SHOT - ON LOLA'S FOOTBALL PORTRAIT.
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Danica: The day he retired from football...
SCENE #3: CLOSEUP SHOT DANICA
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Danica: Lola started chasing his biggest dream
SCENE #4: CLOSE-UP LOLA AND DANCER IN LAUNDARAY
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Danica: A business of his own...Lola's first step...
Lola: Mmmm
SCENE #5: LOLA POSES
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Danica: He built his website with GODADDY.COM
SCENE #6: LOLA AT HIS COMPUTER
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Danica: And with GODADDY'S easy to use e-commerce tools...
SCENE #7: CLOSE-UP LOLA'S COMPUTER
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Danica: Lola will soon sell his own line to the world
SCENE #8: CLOSE-UP LOLA
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Lola: Oooey
SCENE #9: LOLA AT POOL FLOATING AWAY
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Dania: Lola dreams big...and who's to aruge?
Lola: Uhhhuh
SCENE #10: GODADDY.COM
Danica: See more now at GODADDY.COM
VERY GOOD work here, Steph!
ReplyDeleteYou missed a few moments - italics, punctuation at the end of script lines...
Overall, though, you are learning the Web 2.0 Mash Method!
Bravo,
Dr. W